Slide 1:You can shorten "We make finding a reliable, trustworthy babysitter easy with our young energetic babysitting service staff on call 24 hours a day." to "We make finding a reliable, trustworthy babysitter easy"
Slide 2:"Service Component Costs" should be on one line
Slide 8: all the "numbers" slides are hard to read, try making font bigger or trying some other way to make it legible. The convention on revenues is that they come on top of the spreadsheet, with expenses below. Then the profit and loss line is total revenues less total expenses.
Slide 1:You can shorten "We make finding a reliable, trustworthy babysitter easy with our young energetic babysitting service staff on call 24 hours a day." to "We make finding a reliable, trustworthy babysitter easy"
ReplyDeleteSlide 2:"Service Component Costs" should be on one line
Slide 8: all the "numbers" slides are hard to read, try making font bigger or trying some other way to make it legible. The convention on revenues is that they come on top of the spreadsheet, with expenses below. Then the profit and loss line is total revenues less total expenses.
This is a decent business idea and I would have liked to see you try to win the business pitch competition.
ReplyDeleteThe slides are much better, Grade: B+